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Mosaic: Fatal Craving

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Made this one months ago for the ~Transformers-Mosaic. To be honest, I'm not that satisfied with it. Still, I don't think I've ever spent as much time in any comic page. But I suppose it's thanks to the coloring and the fact that I still had a hard time drawing robots back then (yes, I've improved a lot at that part ... at least I can draw them faster). I think it's the speech bubbles that messes the whole thing up. They're all over the place and there's like too much text in the bubbles. The latter thing can be explained, since it's the first time in years I make a comic that's less than 15 pages long. ^^;

Anyway, I still want to post it since I like the story pretty much, and to share a part of my view (or version if you prefer that) of Starscream. Taking place somewhere in a longer story I had planned about the three seekers. I even wrote a long script about how they turned out to be criminals in the first place. Though I scrapped it halfway through since Starscream turned out to be too much like Swindle. xD

I'm not really happy with the art either. It's so damn grity (scanner's to blame?), or as someone at ~Transformers-Mosaic expressed it "looking as if it came out of a garbage can". xD Now I don't mean it is crap, it just look as if it came straight out of a dump. So damn dirty. xP But for some magical reason most people seemed to like the art.

It was very fun to do. And I'm halfway through my next piece of mosaic (doing the coloring right now but it goes sloooow). There will be less words and I hope to have improved the art at least a little bit (but it was drawn like two months ago) ... Some people also remarked on the overall paneldeisgn here. To be honest, I know nothing about that stuff. I just draw it like I feel it. But from now on, I will try to put more thought into it!

And .. uh... yeah. That's my real full name. I hate it. But the idea of using a pseudonym didn't strike me while I did this.

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Radimona's avatar
Jag tycker att den här serien ser väldigt snyggt ritad ut i sin egen typ trasiga stil. Skojjade bara, jag tycker att den ser typisk Hannig med all svärta och sotighet, men samtidigt är den förståelig och jag fattar allt som sker. Du hade lite mycke text, men det kanske behövs för att förstå vad som sker, så jädra mycke text var det inte så att det förstör alltihopa... Du är väldigt självkritisk. Synd det, för du är redan jätte bra på att göra serier. Men är man självkritisk kanske man bara kommer att sträva efter bättre och sen blir det faktiskt en utveckling i din konst. Om du förstår vad jag menar. Jag kanske låter lite svammlig nu. Äch, JAG gillar det mesta du gör. Keep up the good work! ;)